zomg
pretty hair

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Did you even read the artist comments?? ¬_¬

Since you're a friend, I won't delete your comment though. -_-;

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"I sometimes think that we must be all mad and that we shall wake to sanity in straight-waistcoats." -Dr. Seward

That's too cute.

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Like I said to the last person who commented, did you even read my comments?
Especially the big ass bit in bold??

*sighs*
Not meaning to be a bitch about this, but seriously.
"That's too cute" doesn't help me get better.
;-;
Thanks anyway.

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"I sometimes think that we must be all mad and that we shall wake to sanity in straight-waistcoats." -Dr. Seward

Hmm well , if you want stronger critique,
I'd say you really needed to work on the tounge, and maybe the shadowing in the background

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Can we truely call this existance, without hearts?

Lol I'll do this the way Mr. Foster taught us.

1- What I like about it is how you did the background and the graffiti on the background. It's new for you, and I loves it. Plus it's very detailed.

2- What I don't like is how the background doesn't fit her very well. It's hard to explain but it's like something is off there. Also the eye isn't very sharp, it's very well done, but in my opinion it would look better if you'd used a sharper contrast.

3- What could be improved is like stated above, her eye seems to be a little too rounded for the seriousness of the rest of the picture, like it seems too chibi-ish. Also some of her hair doesn't cast a shadow on her face, which it should depending on the way it looks like the lighting-point is coming from, the bottom right hand corner yah?

All in all, it's a very good piece, but I know you could've done better.

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*nods* Thank you!

That's my weakness with pictures- I can never establish where I want the lighting to come from, so I always have trouble with the shadows.

And I see what you mean about her eyes and her looking out of place.. I'll work on that.

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"I sometimes think that we must be all mad and that we shall wake to sanity in straight-waistcoats." -Dr. Seward

I see. Yeah I could work on making the tongue look more realistic, less pointy and all.
What's wrong with the shadowing in the background? [I admit, shadowing is not my strong point]
If you can tell me what's wrong with it, I'll see what I can do to fix it.
Thanks.

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"I sometimes think that we must be all mad and that we shall wake to sanity in straight-waistcoats." -Dr. Seward

how did you get the crayon effect? is that part of photoshop elements?

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